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Lunar Berry XL by mathew-s-hanley Lunar Berry XL by mathew-s-hanley
Lunar Berry XL, if anybody would like to critique on this piece please go ahead!

Moon and stars [link]

Clouds (I think) [link]
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:icondarkjanet:
DarkJanet Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love purple! XD
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:icontazunee:
Tazunee Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:wow:
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:iconkaos-ninja9:
Kaos-Ninja9 Feb 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice!
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:icond-x-4:
D-X-4 Jan 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Critique on behalf of :iconselftaughtartist:

Vision:3.5 Originality:4 technique:4 Impact:4
Overall: 4

Let's start with vision. I think in the upper left and upper right (left and right from the moon) the start are being repeated. You could use the space there better. The moon is fantastic and I liked very much the veil you created around of it, you kinda missed it a little above the moon though. The clouds are so good. They are adding the magic to the picture. However a good idea would be to let the clouds be on both the bottom right and the bottom left corner,
Your technique is nice, you mange to give some artificial light below the moon. I don't know if making some clouds solid keeping only the background color active (without the stars) would make the picture better.
Overall it's a good picture with a view that all we want to see.
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:iconmathew-s-hanley:
mathew-s-hanley Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Never had a critique before! Cheers and it might sound like a daft question but is it out of 5? I would much apreciate it! It's essectially the same picture but with the colours adjusted I would have altered the clouds some but I have lost the PSD file! -.-
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:icond-x-4:
D-X-4 Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, the max is 5. There is critique system but you have to pay to enable it. You can freely submit critiques though. :)
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:iconmathew-s-hanley:
mathew-s-hanley Jan 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I think I did submit and I know annoying having to pay aha
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:iconsarahrasmical:
SarahRasmical Dec 31, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This kind of images make me feel... calm :)
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:iconmathew-s-hanley:
mathew-s-hanley Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Take a look in my gallery and thank you!
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:iconlxz4eva:
That's one of the most celestial pictures I've ever seen.
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